Friday, March 16, 2018
17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
I believe I received proper constructive feedback regarding my last pitch. Upon reviewing my last pitch I really did discover areas in which I needed to improve on. Not only did I change my attire but I changed the location where I was video taped. I feel as if I needed some more light in my pitch which greatly assists in conveying my message. This time I left behind some of the shenanigans I did on my first clip and tried to make this one more about the customers and the product that I will be pitching to them. I also decided to have somebody video tape me so I can be looking at a person while doing the pitch. I believe that this pitch was a step forward in my journey to having a great pitch. So enjoy!!!!!!
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Hey Teddy!
ReplyDeleteAwesome second elevator pitch!
I feel like there are some really big improvements in this one, which is a lot because the first one was pretty good already. Changing your attire made me believe you were more professional, and I was more willing to listen to what you are saying. This was one a straightforward, well-worded pitch that is better suited for an actually business environment.
Good job!