I received positive feedback on the way I improved on my second pitch. This was regarding my tone, posture, and attire. I believe that I greatly improved on my second pitch and therefore made some small tweaks and adjustments on this pitch to make it seem more professional. I also changed my location because on the second pitch there was a few outside noises that could be distracting to some. The pitch is posted down below, so enjoy again!!
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