Nice pitch. I think adding in those statistics really strengthened your argument because it shows you did some research to determine that the cyber security attack is a big enough problem that needs to be addressed. Identifying why there is a need for your service is a great way to start.
I liked your introduction to the pitch. Wish I would have thought of something clever also. I really do enjoy this idea can't wait to see as the idea develops the further we go through class. As I've stated before, this topic really hits home to me because of how aware my dad is about cyber threats. He always takes extra precautions to secure our information because of situations similar to what you've spoken about.
Hey Teddy! I very much enjoyed your pitch. It was witty and funny. I liked the clever beginning. The statistics definitely helped strengthen your pitch and your calm and confident demeanor showed that you knew what you were talking about when you decided to push this idea. Great work! This sounds like an idea that could actually turn into something lucrative if you keep on developing it further.
Nice pitch. I think adding in those statistics really strengthened your argument because it shows you did some research to determine that the cyber security attack is a big enough problem that needs to be addressed. Identifying why there is a need for your service is a great way to start.
ReplyDeleteI liked your introduction to the pitch. Wish I would have thought of something clever also. I really do enjoy this idea can't wait to see as the idea develops the further we go through class. As I've stated before, this topic really hits home to me because of how aware my dad is about cyber threats. He always takes extra precautions to secure our information because of situations similar to what you've spoken about.
ReplyDeleteHey Teddy!
ReplyDeleteI very much enjoyed your pitch. It was witty and funny. I liked the clever beginning. The statistics definitely helped strengthen your pitch and your calm and confident demeanor showed that you knew what you were talking about when you decided to push this idea. Great work! This sounds like an idea that could actually turn into something lucrative if you keep on developing it further.